my blog is pure okay?

1. A lot of journalists who are just starting out tend to write about data or issues and don't tell a story, which is what gets readers to pay attention. You have to think about a specific theme and add those human elements. While facts are important and you need to have them in there, you also ned to think about joy and emotion and humor. Anything that will attract the reader and make them think about the story you wrote.

2. When writing a journalism story it's a good idea to use or consider dramatic devices, such as drama, character, conflict, dialogue, order, anticipation, and climax. These all help to progress your story and have those human terms in there that will keep the reader hooked and feeling the things you want them to feel.